Adam pointed of the 'Dre Beats' headphones which is part of the grime culture that is why the artist is wearing them. However there also part of the hip hop culture and the interviewee has got the genre of the song wrong. This is something we could of been more clearer about. MK is not just grime but he is english hip hop. That is why he is not in an 'estate' but is in an open area like a Alexander palace. This location was used for its colour, view and link to London.
Jason pointed out that he liked the artist performance skills and it made the video look professional. He also liked the transitions and found it hard to find negatives about the video, however he did say that if we could we should of added a car, something that is seen in many hip hop videos. When we first planned the video we did want this however there was no car avalible. And finally he thought there should of been a female in the video as the song is about a female but i think the video still works well without one because the song is about the artist not being with the female and denying his over for her but missing her 'Just a little'. So having no female emphasises this.
Jason thought that the album cover should not of had lines because there "chunky" and draws attention from the rest of the cover. I think they could of been much smaller also. Furthermore he said he didn't like the black background however i like the simplicity. He said the cover fits the genre and has typical conventions which he said was a good and bad thing. I didn't want to challenge the conventions in my album cover however challenging the conventions could be something I'd try next time it seems like a fun task.
The advert he though contained to much things and there wasn't enough space. I imagine the poster on a billboard and I think it would look better on there and not so compact. He did however like the image of MK pointing to his album.
His favourite was the inside of the digipak. Because he liked the image, triangle on the CD and the little shout out. He likes the black and white contrast on this part but not onn the front. He thinks the front should be more creative because that would sell he product. I do agree and think next time I will make it more colourful.
Kayla liked the camera movements and camera angles, many close ups which is one of the main conventions of a music video. She other than Adam liked the black background because the clothes stand out. And also unlike Adam she likes all the different locations. She thought the steadiness of the camera could of been better, maybe we should of used the tripod more. Also there was some dark shots which I do agree and wish we used the spotlight more. She thinks that MK shouldn't of been in front of Range as much as he was but we did this to emphasise MK is the main actor.
Unlike Jason Kayla liked the use of the black and white colours. She also liked the effects of MK in different colours because it makes the audience focus on the main artist. However she thinks I should of used an image with my mouth closed. I didn't think about this but I tried to make the over like Tinie Tempah Pass Out cover. She thinks The album cover on the advert should of been bigger and the logos not stretched as much, I have too agree.
From all the audience feedback I've realised things I could of improved on. I now know what I will do better next time.
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